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For him... by ~lorananirren:iconlorananirren:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Tell me this is true.
I may not believe you now,
but that's not the important thing.
For the sake of what I have not known,
show me what your truth means.

Make it tangible.
Depth, height, length, weight
color sound scent.
Let me breathe in the essence of your truth
until I can never forget its taste.

Please,
don't ask me to
accept your truth on faith.
My faith is not blind;
too broken to allow for empty words.

I'm not beyond repair.
Just understand the value of patience,
invest your time and truth in me
and you will be rewarded -
my full, waking heart...
Yours.
©2009 ~lorananirren
:iconlorananirren:

Author's Comments

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Edit: WHY DID NO ONE TELL ME IT SAID BREATH INSTEAD OF BREATHE! God I hate that, and then I find myself guilty of it! A pox upon my soul! >.<

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Mood: Artistic ~LurkingMire Apr 1, 2009, 7:49:04 PM
lovely sweetheart, it sort of makes hungry for affection and scared by the insanity of women all at the same time. thank you love

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"YOU ARE THE CHURCH I AM THE STEEPLE
WHEN WE FUCK WERE ALL GODS PEOPLE"
MARYLIN MANSON
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~Iamthedark Apr 1, 2009, 9:07:19 PM
It sounds like one lover reaching out to another, I like it, it has teeth, good work!...iamthedark

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HAND IN HAND, TOGETHER WE STAND, ON THE THRESHOLD OF A DREAM...MOODY BLUES
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Mood: dA Love ~lorananirren Apr 1, 2009, 9:59:46 PM
You calling me insane? :crazy: ... :chainsaw: Heh heh, just kidding xD Not really what I expected someone to read from this, but that's one of the best things about sharing works like this. Thanks for sharing your interpretation! :)

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The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
:iconlorananirren:
~lorananirren Apr 1, 2009, 10:00:27 PM
Teeth eh? Interesting description...I like it. Thanks for the comment :)

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The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
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~Goddess-of-Snark Apr 16, 2009, 5:05:57 PM
This describes my emotions so well. It's beautiful.

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Just because I don't tell you doesn't mean it isn't true.
:iconlorananirren:
~lorananirren Apr 17, 2009, 2:42:39 PM
Thank you :hug: And thanks much for the fave as well! :)

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The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
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~Marcial-Alejandro Apr 29, 2009, 5:11:11 PM
I read this and I see scar upon scar upon scar. Even through all that, I see a longing to trust again, to heal the wounds. Through all the past hurt, I see hope. Cautious hope..but still hope.

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The heart believes that which the mind cannot comprehend.
[link] <---A poem I think everyone should read. (Not to glorify my own work)
[link] <---my gallery, please do have
:iconlorananirren:
~lorananirren Apr 29, 2009, 6:29:48 PM
*nod* You see me. Thank you for your comment :hug:

--
The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
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