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Months together
Without a touch
Relationship based
On mind and soul
Not a touch
Yet such love
As lasts throughout
The ages
Through such strife
As most see
Within a lifetime
We’ve battled through
And stayed true
You and me
Will be
Together
Always
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Pappagallina Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish this could be true...

ahh...


distance...
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unheard-echo Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this so much. It's nice to know i'm not the only one in this situation.
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kjghluvr Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Student General Artist
nice to know there are others :3
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kitty3669 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
My sentiments exactly...it's nice to know others are in the same boat, so to speak
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I'm not anymore. Truthfully, this poem is a testament to a bad time in my life these days, and it makes me sad in a way that it's my most loved poem by the devart public lol.

I appreciate that you do like it though, and I thank you for your words and taking the time to read my work. I hope that your experiences fare better than mine :)
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give-me-my-art-plz Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010
This is adorable! I love it, it totally describes the relationship between me and my love
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the comment.
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give-me-my-art-plz Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010
No problem :heart:
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elephantjuice14 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009
i really love this poem.
i can relate on this 'cause
i'm now in a long distance
relationship. err.:]
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you like it. I actually don't like this poem much anymore, but it's one of my most popular heh. Funny how that works.
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elephantjuice14 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009
haha. you're welcome.
where did you get that ideas?
base in your own experience?
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, long time ago. Part of the reason I don't like it so much anymore heh.
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atlantiluna Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2008
Very touching poem... nicely written, short & clear & very true! Long distance is a bit difficult huh... going through it now so I know what you mean in the poem.
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
*nod* It is...but in all honesty I don't really like this poem much anymore lol. I don't think I really ever did, it's not top quality in my opinion, but all the others who love it say otherwise, so I'm very thankful for the comment and your enjoyment of it ^_^
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atlantiluna Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2008
Lol. Well that's all right. :p Even though you feel you can do better, I think it does describe a long distance relationship pretty well...
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you think so. Thanks again! :D
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:iconatlantiluna:
atlantiluna Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2008
You're welcome... again ;)
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Glowing-Green-Eyes Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2008
Beautifully done... :nod:
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much, and thanks for the fave as well :)
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Glowing-Green-Eyes Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
You are very welcome! :hug:
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Firestarter7 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2008
wow its so sad and wonderful at the same time.....
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:iconlorananirren:
lorananirren Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you can appreciate it, thank you.
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outsane13 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
Thats nice :)
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :) Wouldn't call it my best, but glad you like it heehee.
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Marcial-Alejandro Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006
a long distance relationship..been th ere. Luckily it is over and I am living alongside my long distance lover. I wrote quite a few poems concerning the subject, have a look through my gallery.
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
I have actually, and I do believe I commented on some of em :) We'll see how it pans out, I think this is pretty serious stuff, but its hard to judge as we've only been "together" for over a month. *shrug* I'm just enjoying the sensations of dating for now, he IS my first boyfriend lol :D
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Marcial-Alejandro Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2006
lemme tell you kiddo, it'll get harder as time goes on. You need to have that basic trust in the other person. And honestly, after your first visit together..it'llbe impossibly hard to go back to your separate lives. But if your love is real and deep enough, you'll make it through. :)
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the knowledge, i truly appreciate it. trust for me is not a problem, I do trust my bf. He's having a hard time trusting me though, for valid reasons...and i dont doubt the difficulty of having to return home afterwards. I do think we will make it though...so here's hoping! :D
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ShadowsBurning Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006
:thumbsup: How did it work out in English?
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
heh heh, told you about my mistake as that went lol
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ShadowsBurning Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006
Yeah...that sucks lol
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
it do at that, oh well *shrug*
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MalevolentKadaj Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006
If only it were actually as easy as the poem makes it seem.
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lorananirren Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Quite so. ...quite so.
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